GITBOOK-292: change request with no subject merged in GitBook

rewards/df-intro.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ description: The "low down", the definitions, the deets 🧑‍🏫
 
 ### What is Data Farming?
 
-Data Farming (DF) is Ocean Protocol's **incentive system for curating high quality assets on the Ocean Market.** Participants vote on the Ocean Market assets that they believe are high quality and likely to sell. If they are right, then these Data Farmers **get a portion of the Ocean Market sales of the assets** they voted on!
+Data Farming (DF) is Ocean Protocol's **incentive system for curating and publishing valuable assets on the Ocean Market.** Participants vote on the Ocean Market assets that they believe are high quality and likely to sell. If they are right, then these Data Farmers **get a portion of the Ocean Market sales of the assets** they voted on!
 
 (If you are familiar with 'liquidity mining', then you will find that Data Farming is similar but tuned instead for the curation of high quality assets on the Ocean Market.)
 
@@ -56,4 +56,4 @@ You can read more about the implementation [in this blog post](https://blog.ocea
 
 ## [GET STARTED DATA FARMING HERE.](https://df.oceandao.org)
 
-Our [guides](../user-guides/) will show you how to do the basics.
+### Unsure how? Our [guides](../user-guides/) will show you how to do the basics.

user-guides/claim-ocean-rewards.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 description: How to claim OCEAN token rewards from data farming 🧑‍🌾🥕
 ---
 
-# Claim OCEAN Rewards
+# Claim Rewards Data Farming
 
 <figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/underwater-treasure.gif" alt=""><figcaption></figcaption></figure>
 
@@ -24,4 +24,10 @@ This is where you click to claim your rewards! Easy peasy. You will need to appr
 
 <figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/rewards/claim-rewards.png" alt=""><figcaption><p>Click the pink Claim # Ocean buttons</p></figcaption></figure>
 
-#### Note: If you forget to claim your OCEAN rewards, then do not worry because they continue to accumulate! You can claim them after Thursday. 😃
+### FIRST TIME CLAIMING?
+
+You will need to wait at least one week, but not more than two weeks to claim your rewards for the first time. Check back on Thursday!
+
+### FORGOT TO CLAIM?
+
+If you forget to claim your OCEAN rewards, then do not worry because they continue to accumulate! You can claim them anytime after Thursday. 😃

user-guides/get-veocean-tokens.md

@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
 ---
-description: >-
+description: Get veOCEAN tokens to use the Data Farming dApp and make yield! 🧑‍🌾🥕
-  Get veOCEAN tokens to use the Data Farming dapp and make passive yield!
-  🧑‍🌾🥕
 ---
 
 # Get Started Data Farming
 
+### What the \*@$! is Data Farming?
+
+[Data Farming](https://df.oceandao.org) is our dApp that generates yield for participants that curate and publish valuable assets on the [Ocean Market](https://market.oceanprotocol.com). 
+
 <figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/super-mario-coins.gif" alt="" width="250"><figcaption><p>Get veOCEAN tokens</p></figcaption></figure>
 
-### What is veOCEAN? 🌊
+### What is veOCEAN and why do you want it? 🌊
 
-veOCEAN is a 'voting escrowed' token used in Ocean Protocol's Data Farming dapp to **generate passive and active OCEAN token rewards**. [Data Farming](https://df.oceandao.org) is our dApp to incentivize the publishing and curation of high quality assets on the [Ocean Market](https://market.oceanprotocol.com). Are you curious to learn more about Data Farming or you're a visual learner? Check out our video tutorial below!
+In order to **gain yield Data Farming**, you will need to lock your OCEAN tokens first! When you lock your OCEAN tokens, you get **veOCEAN tokens** and **weekly passive OCEAN rewards** in return. veOCEAN is a token used in Ocean Protocol's Data Farming dApp to **generate even more yield,** called **weekly active OCEAN rewards**, for allocating your veOCEAN tokens to your favorite assets and get a portion of their Ocean Market sales!
 
-{% embed url="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zAQlPHkK3og" %}
+### Don't have OCEAN tokens yet? Get those first!
-
-### How to Get veOCEAN
 
 #### **Step 1 - Get OCEAN tokens**
 
@@ -24,7 +24,13 @@ veOCEAN is a 'voting escrowed' token used in Ocean Protocol's Data Farming dapp
 
 * Send your OCEAN tokens to a self-custody wallet of yours that supports ERC-20 tokens, like Metamask for example.
 
-#### **Step 3 - Go to Ocean Protocol's Data Farming dapp**
+### Where the rubber meets the road 🚗💨
+
+{% embed url="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zAQlPHkK3og" fullWidth="false" %}
+Watch our turorial or read, it's your choice!
+{% endembed %}
+
+**Step 3 - Go to Ocean Protocol's Data Farming dapp**
 
 * Go to [https://df.oceandao.org/](https://df.oceandao.org/)
 
@@ -44,4 +50,4 @@ In this step you will:
 * Click the “Create Lock” button.
 * Accept the transaction in your wallet.
 
-Congratulations! You have now locked your OCEAN tokens for veOCEAN tokens.
+Congratulations! You have now locked your OCEAN tokens for veOCEAN tokens and are generating passive yield automatically. You can [claim your passive OCEAN rewards](claim-ocean-rewards.md) every Thursday - note that your first time claiming rewards will require at least one week, but not more than 2 weeks of wait!

user-guides/how-to-data-farm.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ description: Make extra dosh with active rewards yield in Data Farming
 
 <figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/gif/farming.gif" alt=""><figcaption></figcaption></figure>
 
-The bread and butter of the Data Farming dApp is incentivizing OCEAN rewards for curating high quality datasets and algorithms on the Ocean Market. The way that users curate high quality assets on the Ocean Market is by allocating veOCEAN to them using the Data Farming dApp. We'll show you how!
+The bread and butter of the Data Farming dApp is incentivizing OCEAN rewards for curating valuable assets on the Ocean Market. The way that users curate assets is by **allocating veOCEAN** to them using the Data Farming dApp. We'll show you how!
 
 #### Step 1 - Navigate to the Data Farming dApp
 
@@ -34,4 +34,4 @@ The bread and butter of the Data Farming dApp is incentivizing OCEAN rewards for
 
 <figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/update-allocations.png" alt=""><figcaption><p>Click the Update Allocations button</p></figcaption></figure>
 
-#### That's it! You've successfully allocated (aka "voted on") your favorite assets on the Ocean Market using your veOCEAN tokens. Now, just wait until next Thursday to see if you can claim any OCEAN rewards on the Active Rewards section of the Rewards page for your portion of the assets' sales.&#x20;
+That's it! You've successfully allocated (aka "voted on") your favorite assets on the Ocean Market using your veOCEAN tokens and are generating active rewards yield. Now, just wait until next Thursday to see if you can [claim any OCEAN rewards](claim-ocean-rewards.md) on the Active Rewards section of the [Rewards page](https://df.oceandao.org/rewards) for your portion of the assets' sales. Remember that your first time claiming rewards will require at least one week, but not more than 2 weeks of wait!