From b345da838324733cf49c1fda33f633fb3e95c2f8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: idiom-bytes Date: Tue, 11 Jul 2023 10:30:25 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Fixing Casianas feedback. --- rewards/df-basic.md | 2 +- rewards/df-intro.md | 4 ++-- rewards/veocean.md | 4 ++-- user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md | 4 ++-- 4 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/rewards/df-basic.md b/rewards/df-basic.md index 94b8e3e5..7b387d0f 100644 --- a/rewards/df-basic.md +++ b/rewards/df-basic.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ description: Show you can complete all User-Guides as the last steps to master D ### Get Started -Our [User Guides](../user-guides/README.md) get you started Data Farming quickly so you can complete all operations. Follow these guides to get a complete handle on all Data Farming activities. +Our [User Guides](../user-guides/README.md) get you started on Data Farming quickly so you can complete all operations. Follow these guides to get a complete handle on all Data Farming activities. {% content-ref url="../user-guides/get-started-df.md" %} [get-started-df.md](../user-guides/get-started-df.md) diff --git a/rewards/df-intro.md b/rewards/df-intro.md index 5a72079e..2aaf14a3 100644 --- a/rewards/df-intro.md +++ b/rewards/df-intro.md @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Every week OCEAN rewards are paid out to Data Farmers in two different ways: **p #### Splitting the Pie -Each Data Farming weekly round has a pool of OCEAN rewards, and 50% of the pool is paid out in the form of passive rewards & 50% in the form of active rewards. +Each Data Farming weekly round has a pool of OCEAN rewards, where 50% of the pool is paid out in the form of passive rewards & 50% in the form of active rewards. | Passive Rewards | Active Rewards | | --------------- | -------------- | @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Active rewards are governed and defined by the [Reward Function](df-max-out-yiel To estimate your APY effectively, you will need a good understanding of how Passive and Active Rewards work. Therefore you should make sure to complete reading the documentation on Data Farming. -To help you understand Data Farming and APYs and a bit better, [we have provided a couple of scenarios](../user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md) so you to can easily get an overview of how your yield might behave depending on your decisions. +To help you understand Data Farming and APYs a bit better, we have provided [a couple of scenarios](../user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md) so you can easily get an overview of how your yield might behave depending on your decisions. ## [GET STARTED DATA FARMING HERE.](https://df.oceandao.org) diff --git a/rewards/veocean.md b/rewards/veocean.md index 05f973f9..1d662c3e 100644 --- a/rewards/veocean.md +++ b/rewards/veocean.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ --- description: >- - Learn the basic moves to start kicking a** Data Farming + Learn the basic moves to start kicking a** at Data Farming --- # Passive Farming veOCEAN @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ After choosing your lock period and locking up your OCEAN into the vault, you wi veOCEAN is non-transferable. You can’t sell it or send it to other addresses. -_To help you more easily understand this, [we have created a couple of examples for you](../user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md) so you can more easily visualize the impact for your decisions on your overall yields._ +_To help you more easily understand this, we have created [a couple of examples](../user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md) so you can more easily visualize the impact of your decisions on your overall yields._ ### Linear Decay diff --git a/user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md b/user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md index 82cca9ca..87505ad0 100644 --- a/user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md +++ b/user-guides/how-to-df-estimate-apy.md @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ We have provided 2 sheets as an example of locking-up 10,000 OCEAN for: 1. A 4-year investment period 2. A 6-mo investment period -These examples are meant to be as simple as possible so anyone can understand them. They are naive investment strategies and are meant to provide the reader some examples to build upon. Please copy this spreadsheet and modify as you wish. +The above are simplified examples meant for everyone to understand. They are naive investment strategies and are meant to provide you, the reader, with some examples to build upon. You can use these as a reference to create your own plan, so feel free to make a copy of this spreadsheet and customize it to your needs and wants.

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@@ -33,6 +33,6 @@ Having said this, we do provide a thorough dashboard that provides historical an

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-You can also [learn how rewards are calculated here](rewards/df-max-out-yield.md#how-rewards-are-calculated) to understand more about what's happening behind the scenes each rounn of Data Farming. +You can also [learn how rewards are calculated here](rewards/df-max-out-yield.md#how-rewards-are-calculated) to understand more about what's happening behind the scenes of each Data Farming round. Finally, you can [review the implementation inside df-web](https://github.com/oceanprotocol/df-web/blob/main/src/utils/rewards.js) to understand how APYs are calculated at the frontend/UI level. \ No newline at end of file