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 # 📊 Data Science
 
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 Ocean Protocol was built to serve the data science space. 
 
  
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 Data engineers can publish pipelines for curated data, allowing data scientists to conduct feature engineering and build models on top. The models can be deployed with Compute-to-Data and leveraged by app developers building the last-mile distribution of model outputs into business practices.
 
-Ocean Protocol unlocks _composable data science,_ mixing and matching assets to build end-to-end solutions. On-chain assets ensure participants can trustlessly work together while sharing in the upside of the entire system.
+Ocean Protocol unlocks _composable data science,_ mixing and matching assets to build end-to-end solutions. On-chain assets ensure participants can trustlessly work together while sharing the entire system's upside.
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+Explore the rest of this guide to learn more about the data value creation loop, and find your opportunity to build value with Ocean Protocol