From a43e4457656e9cec4b1d9e14e3bcf97be7345c97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Greg McMullen Date: Wed, 4 Oct 2017 13:27:48 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Major copy edits to "foundation" section --- _src/_data/content-front.yml | 32 ++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/_src/_data/content-front.yml b/_src/_data/content-front.yml index eadbf4e..d154d9c 100644 --- a/_src/_data/content-front.yml +++ b/_src/_data/content-front.yml @@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ intro: text: "IPDB allows you to store data indefinitely. It provides blockchain-style tamper-resistance and database-style queryability to give you the best of both worlds." image: feature-03 - title: "Predictable pricing" - text: "Use of IPDB is not based on a cryptocurrency, so you don’t have to worry about a spike in the price making it too expensive to run your application. Usage of IPDB during the test net phase is free of charge." + text: "Use of IPDB is not based on a cryptocurrency, so a spike in the price won't make it too expensive to run your application. Usage of IPDB during the test net phase is free of charge." image: feature-04 - - title: "Governed by Caretakers" - text: "The IPDB Foundation is run by its internet-loving Caretakers around the world." + - title: "Responsible governance" + text: "The IPDB Foundation relies on its caretakers and elected board to navigate governance issues." image: feature-05 - title: "A Dashboard for your IPDB apps" text: "Manage your apps, give users access, and get statistical insights about your app’s API usage." @@ -35,40 +35,40 @@ intro: foundation: title: "IPDB Foundation: human-scale governance" - description: "IPDB relies on caretakers to run the BigchainDB nodes that store and validate transactions. The IPDB Caretakers are the members of the IPDB Foundation." - button: "Learn about IPDB Foundation and its caretakers" + description: "The IPDB Foundation is made up of members called caretakers. Our caretakers elect the management board and operate the nodes that validate blocks and store data." + button: "Learn about the IPDB Foundation" roadmap: title: "Roadmap" - description: "The IPDB rollout plan follows six steps. First, a test network for demos, then for invited users, and then for the general public. When the test phase is complete, a production network will be launched in the same sequence." + description: "The IPDB rollout plan is as follows: A test network for demos, then for invited users, and then the general public. When the test phase is complete, a production network will be launched in the same sequence." steps: - - net: Test net + - net: Test network target: Demo app status: complete time: Q4 2016 - - net: Test net + - net: Test network target: Invited users status: complete time: Q1 2017 - - net: Test net + - net: Test network target: General public status: complete time: Q2 2017 - - net: Production net + - net: Production network target: Demo app status: progress time: In progress - - net: Production net + - net: Production network target: Invited users status: planned - - net: Production net + - net: Production network target: General public status: planned getstarted: title: "Get started with IPDB" - description: "Since you don’t need to setup and maintain your own BigchainDB node, you can get started with IPDB in no time." + description: "You can get started with IPDB in no time:" steps: - title: "Create account" link: "https://developers.ipdb.io/signup?plan_ids[]=2357355879577" @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ getstarted: connect: title: "Stay connected" description: "We'll keep you updated on our progress." - blog_title: "From the blog" + blog_title: "What we're writing about" follow_title: "Follow us" - newsletter_title: "Subscribe to our newsletter" - newsletter_text: "Our email newsletter will keep you informed of major developments." + newsletter_title: "Subscribe to the newsletter" + newsletter_text: "Our email newsletter keeps you up-to-date on IPDB."