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     title: "Designed for data-centric, high-transaction use cases."
     description: "Whether you’re a system architect, a developer or a database specialist, BigchainDB offers the performance, scale and tooling to help you create the future."
     text: "Traditional blockchains lack the scale and speed that most enterprises require. BigchainDB takes a different approach, one that starts with a big data distributed database and then adds blockchain characteristics. The result is linear scaling, high throughput and low latency, making data-centric and high volume use cases a breeze."
-    text2: "BigchainDB puts data at the forefront, making it the only decentralized blockchain database giving enterprises the advantages of scale, queryability and performance in one package."
+    text2: "BigchainDB puts data at the forefront, making it the only decentralized blockchain database. It combines the all-important advantages of scale, queryability and performance of traditional databases with the distributed, secure and immutable nature of blockchain technology into one package."
     quote:
         copy: "It takes me one day to build on BigchainDB what it took me 30 days to build on Bitcoin."
         name: Thomas Fürstner
@@ -32,39 +32,39 @@ intro:
         image: thomas-fuerstner.jpg
     features:
         - title: "Scale & performance"
-          description: "La la la...for high-throughput use cases."
+          description: "Inherits the performance and scalability of the underlying database substrate. Customers can choose their preferred database substrate to minimize integration and interoperability barriers."
           icon: icon-scaling
         - title: "Asset issuance and transfer"
-          description: "La la la... in a flexible JSON data format."
+          description: "Create assets using the widely accepted JSON format while maintaining the ability to add metadata to each asset with each transaction."
           icon: icon-diamond
         - title: "Federation consensus model"
-          description: "Energy efficient federation consensus mechanism with the option for pluggable consensus."
+          description: "Efficient federation consensus mechanism allows for fast transaction confirmation within a trusted permissioned network."
           icon: icon-nodes
         - title: "Asset level permissioning & privacy"
-          description: "La la la"
+          description: "Circuit inspired crypto-conditions allow business logic automation and value transfer. If/Then simple contracts can be triggered with multisig, time and hash locks."
           icon: icon-group
         - title: "Interoperability"
           description: "Interoperability with Ethereum, IPFS, Bitcoin and other protocols such as the Interledger Protocol (ILP), IPLD, COALA IP and COALA SC."
           icon: icon-plug
         - title: "Queryability & indexing"
-          description: "Leverage efficient big data query capabilities out of the box."
+          description: "Leverage efficient big data query capabilities out of the box to search and retrieve transactions and metadata."
           icon: icon-search
         - title: "Monitoring"
-          description: "Monitoring tools for nodes, caretakers and networks."
+          description: "Monitoring tools for nodes, caretakers and permissioned networks, to allow each stakeholder to gain transparency."
+          icon: icon-monitoring
+        - title: "Easy Integration"
+          description: "Build serverless applications with JavaScript that speak directly to BigchainDB, a powerfully simple and quick way to prototype."
           icon: icon-monitoring
 
 support:
     title: "Hands-on production support by the best"
     description: "From ideation to production, we have the team and technology to deploy enterprise-grade applications and platforms for businesses looking to build the tools of tomorrow."
     features:
-        - title: "Training"
-          description: "La la la..."
+        - title: "Ideation"
           icon: icon-education
         - title: "Use case development"
-          description: "La la la..."
           icon: icon-blueprint
         - title: "Application engineering"
-          description: "La la la..."
           icon: icon-engineering
 
 contact: