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-Hi there! Welcome to the hitchiker guides to BigchainDB. We are looking forward to introduce you to the world of BigchainDB and show you, how you can create apps on BigchainDB! However, before diving into the tutorials, you should familiarize yourself with our transaction model. It will be the basis for all upcoming tutorials and apps. This guide provides a gentle introduction to our transaction model.
 
 # About our transaction model
 
-One of the most important aspects to understand about BigchainDB is how we structure our data. Traditional SQL databases structure data in tables, so the fundamental primitive is a table. NoSQL databases extend that by using other formats to structure data (e.g. JSON, key-values etc.). At BigchainDB, we structure data as assets. Our key principle is that everything can be represented as an asset. An asset can characterize any physical or digital object that you can think of (e.g. a car, a house, a data set or an intellectual property right).
+The first thing to understand about BigchainDB is how we structure our data. Traditional SQL databases structure data in tables. NoSQL databases extend that by using other formats to structure data (e.g. JSON, key-values etc.). At BigchainDB, we structure data as assets. Our key principle is that everything can be represented as an asset. An asset can characterize any physical or digital object that you can think of (e.g. a car, a house, a data set or an intellectual property right).
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 These assets can be registered on BigchainDB by users in CREATE transactions and transferred (or updated) to other users in TRANSFER transactions.
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+While traditionally, we design applications focusing on business processes (e.g. apps for booking & processing client orders, apps for tracking delivery of products etc.), in BigchainDB we don’t focus on processes, but on assets (e.g. a client order can be an asset that is then tracked across its entire lifecycle). This switch in perspective from a process-centric towards an asset-centric view influences much of how we build applications.
-While traditionally, we design applications focusing on business processes (e.g. apps for booking & processing client orders, apps for tracking delivery of products etc.), in BigchainDB we don’t focus on processes, but on assets (e.g. a client order can be an asset that is then tracked across its entire lifecycle), which are transferred from one user to the next user. This switch in perspective from a process-centric towards an asset-centric view influences much of how we build applications.
 
 # Visualization of our transaction model
 
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-Find out more about the data model behind our transaction model [here.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/transaction-model.html)
+The data model of transactions is explained in our [transaction model.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/transaction-model.html)
 
 # Asset
 
-An asset can represent any physical or digital object from the real world. It can be a physical object like a car or a house or also a digital object like a customer order or an air mile. An asset can have one or multiple owners, but it can also be its own owner - think of e.g. an autonomous car or an IoT sensor that does transactions automatically. More information about the asset data model can be found [here](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/asset-model.html). An asset always contains the data that is immutable, like in our example the colour and the registration number of a bicycle. Depending on the context, an asset can represent many different things.
+An asset can represent any physical or digital object from the real world. It can be a physical object like a car or a house or also a digital object like a customer order or an air mile. An asset can have one or multiple owners, but it can also be its own owner - think of e.g. an autonomous car or an IoT sensor that does transactions automatically. More information about the asset data model can be found in our [asset model](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/asset-model.html). An asset always contains the data that is immutable, like in our example the colour and the registration number of a bicycle. Depending on the context, an asset can represent many different things.
 
 ### An asset as a claim
 
-An asset can represent an ownership claim for a particular asset, e.g. it represents a claim that user XYZ owns the bicycle with the number XYZ. This can be valid for any type of ownership.
+An asset can represent an ownership claim for a particular object, e.g. it represents a claim that user XYZ owns the bicycle with the number XYZ. This can be valid for any type of ownership.
 
 ### An asset as a token
 
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 ### An asset as a finite state machine
 
-An asset can also be a state machine where the state is represented in the metadata. Each time the machine changes it state, there is a transaction (possibility to listen to it with the websocket) changing the metadata to the state.
+An asset can also be a state machine where the state is represented in the metadata. Each time the machine changes its state, there is a transaction (possibility to listen to it with the websocket) changing the metadata to the state.
 
 ### An asset as a permission (RBAC)
 
-Assets could be also: roles, users, messages, (and anything which can have multiple instances in a scenario — vehicles, reports, and so on). Find more information on our [blog.](https://blog.bigchaindb.com/role-based-access-control-for-bigchaindb-assets-b7cada491997)
+Assets could also be: roles, users, messages, (and anything which can have multiple instances in a scenario — vehicles, reports, and so on). Find more information on our [blog.](https://blog.bigchaindb.com/role-based-access-control-for-bigchaindb-assets-b7cada491997)
 
 As you can see, there are almost no limits with respect to what an asset can represent.
 
 # Input
 
-Conceptually, an input is a pointer to an output of a previous transaction. It specifies to whom an asset belonged before and it provides a proof that the conditions required to transfer the ownership of that asset (e.g. a person needs to sign) are fulfilled. In a create transaction, there is no previous owner, so an input in a create transaction simply specifies, who the person is that is registering the object (this can, but must not be the person, to whom the object will belong afterwards). In a transfer transaction, an input contains a proof that the user is authorized to "spend" (transfer or update) this particular output. In practical terms, this means that with the input, a user is stating which asset (e.g. the bike) should be transferred and he is demonstrating that he or she is authorized to do the transfer of that asset. Learn more about the structure of inputs [here.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/inputs-outputs.html#inputs)
+Conceptually, an input is a pointer to an output of a previous transaction. It specifies to whom an asset belonged before and it provides a proof that the conditions required to transfer the ownership of that asset (e.g. a person needs to sign) are fulfilled. In a create transaction, there is no previous owner, so an input in a create transaction simply specifies, who the person is that is registering the object (this can, but must not be the person, to whom the object will belong afterwards). In a transfer transaction, an input contains a proof that the user is authorized to "spend" (transfer or update) this particular output. In practical terms, this means that with the input, a user is stating which asset (e.g. the bike) should be transferred and he is demonstrating that he or she is authorized to do the transfer of that asset. Learn more about the structure of inputs in our [input model.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/inputs-outputs.html#inputs)
 
 # Output
 
-A transaction output specifies the conditions that need to be fulfilled to acquire ownership of a specific asset. For instance: to transfer a bicycle, a person needs to sign the transaction with her private key. This also implicitly contains the information that the public key associated with that private key is the current owner of the asset. Learn more about the data model of outputs [here.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/inputs-outputs.html#outputs)
+A transaction output specifies the conditions that need to be fulfilled to acquire ownership of a specific asset. For instance: to transfer a bicycle, a person needs to sign the transaction with her private key. This also implicitly contains the information that the public key associated with that private key is the current owner of the asset. Learn more about the data model of outputs in our [output model.](https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/inputs-outputs.html#outputs)
-Note that a transaction can also have multiple outputs. These are called divisible assets. To learn more about divisible assets, complete our [tutorial.](../tutorial-token-launch/) The output can also contain complex conditions (e.g. multiple signatures of multiple people) to acquire ownership. You can learn more about these cryptoconditions [here.]( https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/conditions.html)
+Note that a transaction can also have multiple outputs. These are called divisible assets. To learn more about divisible assets, complete our [tutorial.](../tutorial-token-launch/) The output can also contain complex conditions (e.g. multiple signatures of multiple people) to acquire ownership. Learn more about that in the data model for [cryptoconditions.]( https://docs.bigchaindb.com/projects/server/en/latest/data-models/conditions.html)
 
 # Metadata
 
-The metadata field allows to add additional data to a transaction. This can be any type of data, e.g. the age of a bicycle, the kilometers driven etc. The good thing about the metadata is that it can be updated and changed with every transaction, therefore in contrast to the data in the asset field, the metadata is mutable in every transaction. Additionally, with the release of BigchainDB 1.3, we introduced the ability to query for metadata. Read more about that on our [blog.](https://blog.bigchaindb.com/bigchaindb-version-1-3-7940cc60c767)
+The metadata field allows to add additional data to a transaction. This can be any type of data, e.g. the age of a bicycle, the kilometers driven etc. The good thing about the metadata is that it can be updated with every transaction. So, in contrast to the data in the asset field, the metadata field allows to add new information to every transaction. Additionally, with the release of BigchainDB 1.3, we introduced the ability to query for metadata. Read more about that on our [blog.](https://blog.bigchaindb.com/bigchaindb-version-1-3-7940cc60c767)
 
 # Transaction ID